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Sep 8
i remember saying that this was just a rough idea. its true, it was. but i think i might make it work. i haven't been writing much, hence the disappearance. happy september.  
i think im gonna fix the lines, add more word first..

the og;
i couldn't take the aching
so i let it out
on the people closest to me.
i hurt my best friends
my day ones
the people who care too much to be hurt like that.

edited;
i couldn't take the aching
the pain; it hurt me,
physically
and emotionally.

so i let it out,
in the worst way i could,
on the people closest to me.
i hurt my best friends --
my day ones,
the people who care too much
about me
to be hurt like that.
by me.

i feel so bad.
i don't know how to fix it.

can i even fix it?

i like this a lot more. i think it gets my point across. its just very specific. but..yeah. need some title ideas because im stumped.
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