Nov 2013
And why is it
That all I see is bad
Why must it be
That there isn't any good
Is it so, that my hate
Is greater than yours?
I pass judgement
Without sharing connotation
My hate is my own and it is so heavy
I must give it away
I will force it on you
I must force it on you
All things bad and wrong and immoral
I see them as the few truths that exist
AND THEREFORE
MY HATE
IS BETTER THAN YOURS!
That all I see is bad
Why must it be
That there isn't any good
Is it so, that my hate
Is greater than yours?
I pass judgement
Without sharing connotation
My hate is my own and it is so heavy
I must give it away
I will force it on you
I must force it on you
All things bad and wrong and immoral
I see them as the few truths that exist
AND THEREFORE
MY HATE
IS BETTER THAN YOURS!
I'm unsure of whether hate, though obviously a feeling, is best described as something liquid or hard, or should be used with amount or much. "I have a lot of hate." versus "I have so much hate." or even "I have bucket-loads of hate.". More often than not I hear it used implying, if nothing else, that it's a liquid. Thoughts?
Written by
Gabriel Peter Green
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