Submit your work, meet writers and drop the ads. Become a member
May 19
✦The Revision Begins

The house didn’t creak anymore.
It listened.

Every floorboard,
every doorknob,
every window pane—
they held their breath
as she read the sentence again.

She whispered it aloud.
And somewhere,
something changed.

The mirror in the hallway blurred.
Not fogged—blurred.
Like someone had smudged the image
with an eraser meant for dreams.

She stared into it.
Not at herself—
but at the edges.

Behind her,
the hallway stretched longer
than the house should allow.
Three more doors
than she remembered.

One of them
was open.

She took the journal with her.
Not for comfort.
But because it pulsed now—
as if the pages
were breathing.

Each step toward the door
felt like a footnote
she was only beginning to understand

On the other side:
a study that had never existed.
Books she’d never read
but somehow recognized.
A cup of tea, still steaming.

And on the desk—
The Story script.

Its title:
Elsewhere Draft: For Her.

She opened to the first page.

The words were hers.
But she had never written them.
#thought
In Chapter Nine, a place where identity and narrative become indistinguishable, where the boundaries between the written and the living start to vanish. Here, she’s not just reading; she’s becoming part of something far larger, far more elusive.
"The wind carries with it a name you haven’t yet learned to speak."
Nitin Pandey
Written by
Nitin Pandey  24/M/In Observation
(24/M/In Observation)   
43
 
Please log in to view and add comments on poems