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Dr Peter Lim
Poems
Mar 13
The Deceptive Dreamer- sellers
I ain't a Sucker!
Don't sell me
your 'Be positive'
I'm fine in my way-
go and address those
who are in the 'negative'-
how disgusting
is this preaching:
'Follow my advice
success it shall bring!'
Those who had been
taken in
paid $ 5,000
for a course:
' You shall surely win!'
They left with lots
of motivational material
they memorised the formulas
to the very letter
like a prayer!
I met them years later
they still looked dismal:
they failed to know
being positive
is an phenomenon
that comes from their inner!
Written by
Dr Peter Lim
M/Victoria, Australia
(M/Victoria, Australia)
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