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Carson Dees
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9h
The Poem of a Redeemed Man
I feel my past, It’s coming back
All my hardships are dead at last
I shall share my tragedy
Of how it had used to be
I needed help, no one helped me
Another time I touched the moon
I did not feel my certain doom
“For when I fall,
A certain call
Will help me to not fear at all.”
How wrong was I,
Time had flown by,
I thought someone would pick me back up.
But I kept falling, my life shattered
I cried out “Why?”
There wasn’t an answer,
I needed a huge hand.
But however I was still there,
Was what I could not understand.
I felt very alone.
My burden was adding up.
I never filled my own cup,
Of all my wants.
I felt ashamed.
I still fell in the darkness.
I needed help
Help did not come
No one would help me
In my time of need
And I saw Him.
I felt relieved.
He called my name.
I was free,
Free at last.
My burden gone.
I am saved.
Given grace
I’m loved
Wanted
Forgiven
I thank God I never gave up. 😉
#jesus
#saved
Written by
Carson Dees
13/M/United States
(13/M/United States)
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