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Mar 9
He who has the most
Toys, superfluous. Excess  
By end of life wins

Search strive bleed for it
When we obtain what we seek
hollow emptiness

Unquenchable thirst
Contentment within our grasp
Always wanting more



Footnote
Modern Haiku
A series set up progressional
Three lines  syllable count 5-7-5

I don’t know if this poem
Is staying within the
parameters of a Haiku

It could be 
A Tercet is a unit of poetry
that contains three lines stanza

A Tercet can be a
Complete poem or just
A part of a larger poem
Rhymed or unrhymed

So HP, what do you think?
A Tercet or a Modern Haiku



Inspired song;

1) More More More
By Andrea True 1976

2) Money
By Pink Floyd 1973



As soon as we have, the thing we thought would make us happy, we move on to something else in that too becomes our drive and focus dangling the carrot in front of your face, changing the rules along the way
Written by
CJ Sutherland  64/U.S
(64/U.S)   
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