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(can we be saved?)

(my) thoughts speak only of you:

the nightmarish fairytale of

a (crumbling) spirit

tied to a lost soul

 

maybe, if I give you my (heart), it (will) mend the cracks in yours

 

tomorrow night, I will (fall asleep) under cut-glass comets,

trap them in my dream catcher

and gather them for you in the morning:

(soon), the hurt in your eyes will be eclipsed by stardust

 

(from) solar system eyes to renewed heart, you will be happy

 

(life’s cruel), I know,

so let me paint a smile onto your lips:

cherry red’s your (poison)

 

remember when we gorged on cherries, and they stained your tongue?

 

(but) wait! (I) am yet to fix your hair:

let me bottle a waterfall so that it will

cascade

into glinting curls

of liquid pearls

 

it will bring out your eyes, especially when you smile

 

and finally, what I (desperately hope) to do

is breathe the last ounce of strength (that) I have

from my soul into (yours)

 

by remembering what you said to me last night:

 

“I know you (won’t) believe me, but I think you’re beautiful.”

 

You’re right – I didn’t

 

I’m sorry.

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Written by
h-fox
English
Published
Oct 27, 2013
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for my best friend

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