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Renan
Poems
2d
Fence and Axe
There is a fence between me and her
Trying to cross it will get either hurt
Ti’s only a wooden fence though
And it still allowed love to grow
We can’t see or touch,
But my love was an axe enchanted with [Robust]
I tried to chop and slash
To only see a little scratch
So I told my love:
“Put on a glove
And strike the fence hard and true
So I can finally see you”
To kiss your lips is my only want
Even while going against my aunt
To move past that we must wait
until we are married if that's not too late
But a ton of nothing I heard
And with my thoughts, it stirred
Did she not love me so?
Maybe our love was faux
It was the next day
But the silence with me stayed
I tried and tried and tried again
But my strength and love started to wane
The idea behind this poem is that long-distance relationships take a toll on people
#love
#disappointment
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Renan
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