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My Father's Painting

A life hangs painted on the wall of the world

made in brush and texture on the canvas

the hills and trees and rivers of experience

are drawn broad and large.

 

Bright points of detail shining in brighter colour,

memories sparkle like sunlight on water.

Standing out in jewels are snooker and cribbage and beer.

Jokes and stories are picked out like light on leaves

and mended bikes and late night lifts glow as flowers against the shadows.

 

No more trees or hills will find their way onto this view.

No more flowers or rivers will gleam or wind.

It is complete and we must see

though artist's brush is stilled and colours dry

the memories will remain undimmed and firm

and love will keep the picture clear.

 

We stand here now and mourn the artist's passing

but our heavy hearts are eased by the gleaming landscape before us.

And it is to our own pictures we must turn

and save that we keep the memories bright

and at the close we ensure our lives

may at least approach the beauty of my Father's painting.

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Written by
keith-trim
English
Published
Aug 2, 2010
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RIP John Trim 15/08/27 - 20/07/10

This was written to be read at my Father's funeral. It's meant to be personal and I tried to lift the end with a little message for those present.

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