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Thank Goodness

by karmen-was-heard

Was it their fault? Were they in the wrong? She made her choice Was it their responsibility? She thought it through Were they supposed to control that? They did everything right But some things are out of their control Can they be responsible for everything? She didn't follow in their footsteps Instead She turned away She went against her upbringing It saddened them They tried to bring her back Yet she would not return 'Where is justice?' She would ask But she'd never listen Then she fell Well, She jumped She tried to escape their loving hands Forever But failed Thank goodness It couldn't have been their fault But they would have felt it Nonetheless They still feel it now But they will And so will she I hope
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19 / M / Everywhere
For You?
Written by
karmen-was-heard
19 / M / Everywhere
Published
Nov 12, 2024
Time
2m
Tags
#rebel#rebellious#suicide
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