Nov 1
Your memory won't go away,
Of the days from the recent past.
The memories of togetherness,
My heart longs for you now, at last.
Why? Oh, why did you break my heart?
Had those moments been money,
I'd demonetise each one of them...
And I'd see them grow in my assets,
I'd see them grow in my investments,
Clutch you; I'd clutch you to my heart.
Why? Oh, why would you break my heart?
Had those moments been birds,
I'd lure them all inside my heart...
And I'd nourish them with my love,
I'd see them grow under my affection,
Bring you; I'd bring you to my home.
How? Oh, how could you destroy my love?
Your memory won't go away,
Of the days from the recent past.
The memories of togetherness,
My heart longs for you now, at last.
Of the days from the recent past.
The memories of togetherness,
My heart longs for you now, at last.
Why? Oh, why did you break my heart?
Had those moments been money,
I'd demonetise each one of them...
And I'd see them grow in my assets,
I'd see them grow in my investments,
Clutch you; I'd clutch you to my heart.
Why? Oh, why would you break my heart?
Had those moments been birds,
I'd lure them all inside my heart...
And I'd nourish them with my love,
I'd see them grow under my affection,
Bring you; I'd bring you to my home.
How? Oh, how could you destroy my love?
Your memory won't go away,
Of the days from the recent past.
The memories of togetherness,
My heart longs for you now, at last.
My HP Poem #2021
©Atul Kaushal
Meta AI's opinion:
"Longing For You" beautifully expresses the ache of lost love.
Key elements:
1. Persistent memories: "Your memory won't go away"
2. Yearning for togetherness: "My heart longs for you now, at last"
3. Painful separation: "Why did you break my heart?"
4. Metaphors for cherished moments:
- "Demonetise" and "invest" (valuing time together)
- "Lure" and "nourish" (protecting and nurturing love)
5. Emotional repetition: "Why?" and "How?" (anguished questioning)
Themes:
1. Heartbreak
2. Longing
3. Nostalgia
4. Loss
Poetic devices:
1. Rhetorical questions
2. Metaphors
3. Repetition
4. Rhyme
Your poem effectively conveys the intensity of emotional pain and the struggle to move on.
Would you like to:
1. Explore coping mechanisms for heartbreak?
2. Discuss the role of nostalgia in healing?
3. Analyze the impact of metaphors on emotional expression?
4. Share more poetry or thoughts?
©Atul Kaushal
Meta AI's opinion:
"Longing For You" beautifully expresses the ache of lost love.
Key elements:
1. Persistent memories: "Your memory won't go away"
2. Yearning for togetherness: "My heart longs for you now, at last"
3. Painful separation: "Why did you break my heart?"
4. Metaphors for cherished moments:
- "Demonetise" and "invest" (valuing time together)
- "Lure" and "nourish" (protecting and nurturing love)
5. Emotional repetition: "Why?" and "How?" (anguished questioning)
Themes:
1. Heartbreak
2. Longing
3. Nostalgia
4. Loss
Poetic devices:
1. Rhetorical questions
2. Metaphors
3. Repetition
4. Rhyme
Your poem effectively conveys the intensity of emotional pain and the struggle to move on.
Would you like to:
1. Explore coping mechanisms for heartbreak?
2. Discuss the role of nostalgia in healing?
3. Analyze the impact of metaphors on emotional expression?
4. Share more poetry or thoughts?
