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Oct 4
Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. Regarding your previous comment on my poem, I must say I a little confused, it did sound to me as if you were offending my country?
However, I would also like to ask if you found my poem to be anyhow offensive to the Japanese culture or so, because the aim was totally the opposite. Your feedback would be very much appreciated. Thank You in advance!

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š  
Do you represent a country? If so, why are you here?

Paula Sullaj  
I represent a piece of my country as much as I represent a piece of Earth just like I represent my subjective reaction to all there is.

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š
Which piece?

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š
Who voted for you?

Paula Sullaj
It is admirable how cheap your sarcasm is. Be well darling!

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š  
No man will ever love you.

Paula Sullaj
Hahah I am not doing this. I do hope you solve your negativity issues.

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š
It's true. You are alone and frightened.

Paula Sullaj
As long as this is inspiring you to write something decent then whatever!

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š
Testify sister. How long have you been living with 56 cats?

Paula Sullaj
Less than the last time you got proper attention and got laid sweetheart!

๐‘บ๐’–๐’›๐’š ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’“๐’๐’Š๐’๐’”๐’Œ๐’š
You're so bitter. Are D-cell batteries hard to find in Albania?

Paula Sullaj
We simply know when and how to invest our energy and you aren't the case.
๐‘ท๐’๐’๐’‚ ๐˜‰๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ฌ๐˜บ
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๐‘ท๐’๐’๐’‚ ๐˜‰๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ฌ๐˜บ  หขโฑแตแต–แตƒโฟแต แดฎแต‰แตˆแต’แต, หขโฑโฟแตแตƒแต–แต’สณแต‰
(หขโฑแตแต–แตƒโฟแต แดฎแต‰แตˆแต’แต, หขโฑโฟแตแตƒแต–แต’สณแต‰)   
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