DEAR PENPAL PEOPLE, freezed not a word:> _four year old poem alert
can I leave although my returns can’t handle mistreat choking on the shields that they reveal
the stack is packed the thoughts are hacked and my acceptance to the fate is verging on stance
do I sore free for the sake of my flee and redeem the escape of the torturous bleach under my feet or do I abandon my daemons of feels and scratch a sinful crime of a resentful scheme
the ties are secured and the doors are uptorn my legs give up to the shore and I stand up to no more
the search is at stake and time flicks with no shame but the place is not here to be faced
the venture is trapped in a venging mishap the yellow is freezed to an uptown and everything becomes diseased to drown
the green uptakes and the lakes create an explode of scents in the middle of no ends in the ashes of the questionable whens
------ravenfeels
funny how I tried to change the rhythm of the poem, to realize why it is the way that it is in the first place and put it right back to what it was originally ----don't mess with your old self