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Goodbye

Do you remember the day you said goodbye?

Did you cry your most heartfelt cry, and how much did it hurt?

Did it feel like the heavens came crashing down

and on their way to oblivion, they collided with your heart

and stole it away from you?

Stole it away like that indian giving sun,

and however racist it may be,

it's true.

Goodbyes, if properly done, should hurt

You should feel the pain of amputation,

for although it's not external,

it's a part of you removed, but somehow existing on its own.

Goodbyes, if properly done,

should leave you empty.

Empty like that candy *****

after you finished cramming down your last savory bite.

Goodbyes, if properly done,

should leave you yearning for the future.

They should drive you to return

to that thing that you so foolishly left behind.

But, goodbyes, if properly done,

should inspire you to grow.

They should inspire you to create something new,

something fulfilling.

Goodbyes need to be cherished,

and although they arnt the same as a newborn baby,

fragile, innocent and naive,

you should treat them all the same.

Goodbyes are special, unique,

and even though it's redundant to say,

they are one of a kind.

Goodbye's, if properly done,

should not be done

at all.

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Written by
tyler-williams
Published
Jul 27, 2010
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Notes

I wrote this for my best friend back home. I left for college and I felt bad that I left her behind. I want her to know that no matter how far apart we are, we will never say goodbye to each other, and that I will never forget the person that she is.

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