Give me one rose hour by hour To build for me loves glorious tower And turn this pain into a smile Give of yourself un-beguiled
That I might trust love once again Thus accept you more than mere friend And make me know that all is truth Having given the effort and the proof
Then this heart of mine you can rule
2nd version: The Efforts Give me one rose hour by hour To build for me loves glorious tower And turn this pain into a smile Give of yourself un-beguiled
That I might trust love once again Thus accept you more than mere friend And make me know that all is truth Having given the effort and the proof
Then this heart of mine you can rule Show me your love will never decrease For love became an unruly beast O, diminish love not in the least
First version: Seriously, keep or toss that last line? Which one is best, 1 or 2?