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THE COST OF A BAG OF CHIPS.

Ingrid sat on the brick wall

of the bomb site

her hands in her lap

her untidy hair

 

held in place

with wire grips

the plain grey

cardigan and dress

 

had food stains

here and there

you sat beside her

in jeans

 

and bought for you

cowboy shirt

the Saturday film

matinée

 

just seen

suppose I'd best be home

Ingrid said

before Dad gets back

 

he doesn't know

I went to the pictures

and he'll say

it's a waste of money

 

but it's only 6d

you said

surely he wouldn't

begrudge you that?

 

she said nothing

but stood up

and brushed down

her dress

 

best go

she said

wait a while

you said

 

let's buy some chips

before you leave

I've no more money

she said

 

I have

you replied

patting your jean's pocket

*********

 

the 6 shooter

toy gun

hanging

at your waist

 

best not

she said

if Dad sees me

he'll go off

 

the deep end

she stood there

half undecided

chips with salt

 

and vinegar

and maybe

an onion or two

you added

 

giving her a look

your head to one side

she bit her lip

as she fingered

 

her cardigan

but Mum said

not to be late

Ingrid said

 

sometimes

they throw in

a slice of bread

and butter

 

you said

especially for kids

if you give them

I'm starved look

 

she smiled

her hands going

into the cardigan pockets

what if he sees me

 

go in there?

she said

he won't

you said

 

he couldn't see

the end of his nose

without getting dizzy

you said

 

anyway he might not

be back until later

she shrugged

and then said

 

ok if we're quick

and so you stood up

and walked her

up Meadow Row

 

and across the road

to the fish and chip shop

and bought

2 bags of chips

 

and onions

and 2 slices

of bread and butter

because you both gave

 

that we're starved gaze

you walked her back

down Meadow Row

eating in silence

 

she eating ravenously

her fingers busy

her mouth opening

and closing

 

once you'd finished

and you'd stuffed

the waste chip papers

into a bin

 

by the grocer's shop

she said

thank you

that was scrumptious

 

and she kissed your cheek

and walked off

and across

Rockingham Street

 

towards the Square

at the top

by the entrance

with arms crossed

 

grim face

Ingrid's father

stood scowling

standing there.

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terry-collett
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Aug 24, 2013
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