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The First Woman

When I saw her

The first woman with the first wide eyes

Bright and light and dark and deep

With life and mystery

My heart beat like the first hand struck the first drum

And the first song was sung

In dark caves of ten times ten thousand years ago

 

When I first breathed that first scent

My sight stopped

My mind stopped

My mind was my body and my hands and my gut

And my legs extending to the ground and the earth and time

And it slowed down like an ice age beginning

Then it melted into warm fire

Where it burned

 

The first touch of the first woman

Was electrical chemical radioactive bliss

Every piece of matter in me wanted to move and dance and shake and fly apart

The spark from the start of her heart beat

Crossed through the fibers and

Traveled down the pathways of her body

Down the chemical electric synapses

Through her arm and jumped across to my hand

And traveled up and started a new beat

It was a faster, and stronger beat

And it beat

And it beat

Like the first dance,

Shook with the slap and smack of ground and hands and feet

 

Oh the first woman was all women

And then there were other women

And they were people

Flesh and blood

And minds and thoughts

And feelings that I could not feel

Good and bad and indifferent

With hangups and problems

Blemishes and baggage

I met women coming

Women going

Here and there

Now and then

For coffee, for beer,

One evening or ten

I met scientists, nurses

bartenders and baristas.

Living lives I didn't mind

Giving time when it was mine

Asking for things I couldn't find

 

Then I saw You

All of you

In time and space and speed

 

I caught the scent of you

Your fragrance and perfume

And the primal musk of you

That fatal lusts allure

 

I felt you

The gravity of your body from across the room

Your electro-magnetic force pulling

Pressure of the displaced particles pushing

As you walked so slowly towards me

 

And time stopped

Light and sound and movement were captured

Captive to your hypnotic sway

Prisoner to your power over my perception

You moved through the still air

And it swept aside like a curtain as you passed

The world was quiet

 

And then it pounded  

The pressure of it filled the air and everything around it

As you moved closer,

Like ride of the Valkyries

Rising and crashing in waves

It rose as you moved towards me

You carried it in your wake

And then it was a crescendo

A vast overpowering transcendent orchestral cacophony

Of immense intense sound and light and energy erupting

Cymbals crashed and horns blew and strings snapped under the pressure of the vibrations

Brilliant fireworks exploded in the black sky of your brown eyes

As you stopped a few feet from me

 

And time was stopped

You were the first woman

You were all women

You are

The only woman

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Aug 11, 2013
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