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Love's Greatest Things

by jellyfish

From love I love a thousand things but only two or three, make my heart skip a beat, melt and drain to feet. The things in love we overrate confuse and startle me. Making out is great and all but truly you believe? That touching lips is better than, holding hands and cheeky grins. I believe love's greatest things are silent, private, natural, free. You know they know you missed a beat and they know you know they did too. In that brief and perfect moment, brain shuts down; instincts cue. Losing track, left foot next, right foot left foot stop, and - back. Brain loads up, lungs take air, right foot left foot stop - relax. In those brief and perfect moments, when your heart drains to your foot, you know love's worth the tricky bits before and after put. The moment after brain reboots and lungs take air and feet compute. Just before your head is clear, you're sober and your thoughts adhere. You're dizzy, almost, not severe, in a word, your world - ideal. For me, maybe, love is near?
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Written by
jellyfish
English
Published
Jun 29, 2013
Time
2m
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I'm a little dizzy..

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