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Cayley Raven
Poems
Sep 2020
There is no me
What if there is no me?
What if there is just an awareness
of my existence.
Imagine that "I" is a consciousness
that was only gifted
a physical form, the body
a mental state, the mind
an ability to feel emotion, the soul.
If that were to be true,
wouldn't "I" be able to just observe
how my existence feels, how it moves,
or how it makes decisions?
"I" would just watch things happen
at their own will,
the good and the bad,
and experience it alongside.
Perhaps "I" could communicate,
waking my own existence
to the state of consciousness.
Wouldn't that be beautiful?
Because then, all the answers
and the eventual peace of mind
would lay within "me".
Something for you to think about. Thank you for your feedback. Love
Written by
Cayley Raven
27/F/Czech Republic
(27/F/Czech Republic)
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