There are four, please read all Rate your favorite by using assigned Numbers, tell me why. Please don’t be afraid to be critical. Let’s have some fun. Let’s connect I would love the feedback!!! God Bless!!!
When Night Falls—1
Sometimes I pray for the light of day I welcome the distraction of my mind Sometimes at night I wish that My visions were not so well defined
I really have left my past behind but Those pesky cobwebs still hang They’re In the attic of my brain at it Reminds me of when sorrow sang
Most days and nights I get through And I am left completely un phased But something sparks a memory and It can’t leave me completely unscathed
I’ve learned to rely on Jesus And the visions I can quickly dismiss And there were good times and It’s healthy to reminisce
But I confess without warning Frighteningly I will awaken And the sweat and tears are flowing And I am left shaken
The visions of what was long ago Come straight from the Devils castle halls And forgive me but it’s the reason why Sometimes I dread it when night falls
Sometimes the day is too long And it lacks in its charms Sometimes I pray for the day to end So that I can be in my baby’s arms
When I wake up I’m next to her It’s the only place that I want to be When the work day is done I know She’ll be there with me
We’re so good together And it comes as no surprise I knew we were meant for each other The moment I looked into her eyes
I give Jesus my praise And I thank him for his love I will forever be in his debt For the gift he sent from above
When I’m in her presence Believe when I say and I’m not faken My knees still get weak and I Can’t keep them from shaken
So I guess you could say it’s forever love I always come running when she calls And I can’t wait for the day to end And I cherish the time when night falls
Sometimes I rush through my chores With so much to be done But it’s a race against time Trying to beat the setting Sun
I’m always aware of my surroundings I have no choice for my survival One mistake is all it takes, there’ll Be no chance for a reprisal
I thank God for each day and I know There’s no since In wishin and hopin And all throughout the night I’m sleeping with one eye open
There’s the sounds in the wilderness The crickets the toads and the Owl The singing birds the deer and bear The fish jumping and the wolves howl
But there’s a sound that I hear in the Woods and it’s really just unnatural I’m sure that it’s a huge hairy beast But I have no evidence collateral
But you can believe me when I say That it does exist, for I’ve seen its eyeballs And I’ve spent days praying for a never Ending Sun, never a time when night falls
Written By:Charles Kean Copyright 08/04/2020 All rights reserved As a writer I never know where I am going To go when I get an idea. I always get the title first. That’s the idea (Old Ones) (Apocalyptic Sky) (When Sorrow Sang) and so on. I was putting my clothes away the other day Listening to music. Wham out of nowhere (When Night Falls) popped into my head I cannot write it fast enough with one thumb typing, too funny but that’s how I do it. With my dark past the original version is what came out. The title however can really be taken anyway it wants to go. This is true with anything. Poetry, plays, songs, movies. And I thought why not put a little romantic touch on it. Version 2 and I thought how about the working class. Version 3 Then I thought of Horror. Version 4 Please rate them using their assigned number 1-2-3-or 4 And tell me why. Also don’t be afraid of being Critical. I’m 58, I can handle it. God Bless!!!