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Jun 2020
Everyone’s life seems perfect around her
They say she helps them
They’re happy and they’re grateful

Everything became perfect since she came
Their wish is in the angel
She looks like she could save everyone’s day
Or that’s just what they’re thinking

But the angel’s life is not as happy as them
No one ever came to save her
She can’t even save herself
And nobody would realize the sadness
When they’re at the peak of their triumph
English is not my mother language so critic would really improve my writing skills in English :)
Another girl
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Another girl
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