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Sonja Benskin Mesher
Poems
Feb 2020
.the critique.
i feel i cannot get involved
give remarks. i know when
something gets me. embeds
a while
after a moment of reflection
say βbravoβ
all the chat and critique
will only spoil that spot
for me
i reply to you for i like the
simple passing to and fro
with understanding
the talk on heating & coyotes
what good is all the bashing for
though
i must say that i take most remarks
on board &
as a compliment
that someone read
and bothered
i got bashed for not reading
yet i do that too when i am
able
hugging may be more productive
really
oh really
later the chimney sweep comes
to sweep the chimney
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