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Apr 2013
Poison Ivy,
red rash on my limbs.

To the Doc I go,
a shot will do.

It grows on trees,
but they're immune,
their limbs aren't itching.


*Thanks ~timothy~ for a new style.

This is a syllabic poem in seven lines  4/5 5/4 4/4/5
Unrhymed
Lines 1 and 2   INTRODUCE the SUBJECT
Lines 3 and 4   AMPLIFY what is affected by the image/subject.
Line 5 thru 7    Focus on NEW SUBJECT that complements and provides a meditative conclusion.
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Harrogate, TN  April 2013
LD Goodwin
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LD Goodwin  Harrogate, TN
(Harrogate, TN)   
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