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cantstopwontstop

Brain racing, wors falling (or is it flowing?). *******

Hand writing (righting?) the wrongs I've made.

Pen (pin?) scratching words on flesh that doesn't seem to feel.

 

Dog scratching (stretching?) after fleeing (fleaing?).

I don't know (care?) where it (I?) went wrong.

We loved (love?) each other.

 

We moved away (apart?) but not on.

When will (can?) it end?

It won't. It won't. It won't.

 

This doesn't end, this love (lust? loss?) we share.

We lay (lie?) alone together, apart together, in sin together.

In awe together.

 

Do you think (obsess?) about me?

This love is real (real?)

Cantstopwontstop. Why?

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Written by
jake-mckowen
American
Published
May 20, 2010
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© Jake McKowen, 2010

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