Start a new one, better this time use bigger words and think of more rhymes invest some time to diction and theory use alliteration like "while I wandered weak and weary"
That was stolen, yes, from Edgar Allen Poe read some of his and the rest of the pros think it all through, write a rough draft fix the mistakes you've made in the past
In this odd way you'll make better yourself, evolve as an artist, and make the top shelf if that's not the goal, if you've never realized that you're the true reader, you may be surprised
Before we can share and influence the rest an author should feel they've produced their best and if not accomplished or unsatisfied.. start a new one, better this time