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Mar 2013
all right now listen to this:

you all must stop composing
your thoughts and ideas
via poetry
by using the first person singular

does everybody hear this
on HELLO POETRY?

do ya’ got it?

avoid using the ‘’eye’’ word
especially at the start of your verse
it lays too much on the table
it’s ‘’we’’ people
‘’we’’
find the guy that promoted individualism first
and strangle ‘im dead
WE ARE ALL THE SAME
now write…….
jimmy tee
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jimmy tee  VT
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