H'llo Poetry
Classics
Words
Blog
F.A.Q.
About
Contact
Guidelines
© 2024 HePo
by
Eliot
Submit your work, meet writers and drop the ads.
Become a member
bambi
Poems
Mar 2013
saturn
Your trail of ash
bright as a scar
lead me astray
in skies of tar
it was a threadbare
love affair
doomed from the very start
and if I know
you at all,
I know you've gone too far.
Beginning of a much longer poem, work in progress. Commentary much appreciated!
Written by
bambi
Follow
😀
😂
😍
😊
😌
🤯
🤓
💪
🤔
😕
😨
🤤
🙁
😢
😭
🤬
0
1.9k
Hailey G
,
---
,
Margaryta
,
E
,
K Daniel Little-Paw
and
28 others
Please
log in
to view and add comments on poems