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Mar 2013
Your trail of ash
bright as a scar

lead me astray
in skies of tar

it was a threadbare
love affair

doomed from the very start

and if I know
you at all,


I know you've gone too far.
Beginning of a much longer poem, work in progress. Commentary much appreciated!
bambi
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bambi
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