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Nick
Poems
Jul 2019
The Unbearable Loneliness of Presence
That phrase makes me shiver
Makes some solemn silent (?) resounding
Sends me flailing: **** **** **** (word choice is dodgy)
Supersedes sentience
Overall, Iām somewhat confused and disappointed by your work. Please reconsider your ******* of the English language.
The critic becomes a part of the work. Twice.
#explicit
#critic
#descriptive
#meta
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