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[They are strings of letters unset]

by narvik_snow

They are strings of letters unset from their horizons. Swollen ink smearing in air; their little stalks, serene, suffocated, like pockets of dust, attended but in passing. Pieces of you—agile, remiss— spark notes in shattered melody. The dying refrain flutters; only the echoes are staining. She is like a tumbling highway, still tumbling through full-stop.
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Written by
narvik_snow
M / Pacific NW
For You?
Written by
narvik_snow
M / Pacific NW
Published
May 16, 2019
Time
1m
Notes

Decay of sibilance;

Varying structural emphases;

Enjambment as emphasis;

Change in reference pronoun;

Line break with em-dash to de-emphasise the natural chiastic connotation of that device.

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