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Feb 2013
What is a world without being judged?
Without competition or criticizing?
A world where there is no room for improvement
Everything is set in stone, not perfect just you take what you get and deal with it
Where there is no place to showcase your true potential?
No rhyme or reason to try
Less amazing things happen, maybe even nothing spectacular going on
A place doomed for rebellion, implosion
A stack of cards with no foundation, just ready to cave in
A world without love, or feelings
It all dwindles down without one another
One thing could be missing and change it all
And our society would be a soso-ciety
For the world is like playdough, we can choose to shape how it feels and looks but must let it harden on its own
Jorge L Echevarria
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Jorge L Echevarria  30/M/NC
(30/M/NC)   
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