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Feb 2019
I am feeling better
The thoughts are less
Most of the pain has flow out with the river
The river of blood and tears

I am doing better
Therapy is on the move
My mouth is speaking
It helps to process

I have plans for the future
A new house is what I will be looking for
A house for me alone
Just quiet and comfy

I have flashbacks sometimes
Thoughts, memories popping up
From things that remember me of her
But that is okay, as she is a memory

I am doing better
It is going great
The future is near
And I want to meet the future
If you want to know anything or talk about anything. Just say it, don't keep walking around with it. That **** doesn't work, you only will feel more miserable. So please talk if you are in pain, any pain.

Is it "sometimes I have flashbacks" or "I have flashbacks sometimes".
My feeling says the first one. But if that is true the rythem in the poem will be weaker, as not every verse starts with "I".
ThatBrokenOne
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ThatBrokenOne  22/M/Netherlands
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