Jan 2013
in the same way
that a drowning man
wants air;
violently, desperately &
without reservation.
(That is to say)
I need you.
that a drowning man
wants air;
violently, desperately &
without reservation.
(That is to say)
I need you.
I'm really unsure about this poem. I feel like it's overly cliche and while I enjoy the over sentiment I'm seriously considering throwing it away all together.
Comments? Criticisms?
Comments? Criticisms?
