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Jan 2013
Made to Order

Most exquisite bold understatement in terms of endearing grace all is revealed the mind
The perfect conveyance a carriage the romantic ideal you start with the background
Streets Street lamps that are Victorian the horse is the component of a bygone era his
Shod feet are the sounds of tingling magic in the quiet darkness the trees are the harbor
And under the umbrella of magnolia and the stately Oak with the listless Spanish moss
Flows outward with the planted Jasmine along the boulevard the trance is complete and
This is where the mind carriage has reached the heart there is a water fall made from tears
It always flows gently but when others suffer real pain there is a surge and the fall warms
And runs bitter pressure builds the soul changes from care free moods to dark heaviness
With the uninvited pangs and piercing these continue until the eventual problem resolves
The important link has been made a connection to creative power the chamber of the
Heart starts to suggest and reveal that you have opened the hidden resources the keys to
The different doors are raised with the words love caring hope joy understanding then the
Words start to flow empowering enlightened words literally flash the blood begins to
Flow faster breathing takes on the effect of strong wind laced with emotion driven by
Passion by now the carriage is at a fever pitch of white dazzling opulence where on entry
There were the real dark empty impoverished corners that now have undergone
Excavation no longer is the scene rife with the show of dwindling resources now the old
Has been cast asunder and all towers in triumph this all comes about because you decided
To set the sail of your soul toward the setting sun your desired haven but your ships
Charter says on and across all these waters I will always place myself in the service of
Others first and foremost what a fine garment you will wear supple and soft as purist
Lamb’s wool but the greatest will be the pictures with brightest blue representing the
Earthy sky that you worked under for others yellow gold that you were always first one of
The morning so none would go forth without your protective prayers and blessing the gray
Showing you were stalwart as the trees in your love and devotion to all you came in
Contact with the ebony that is pronounced is the marks of vigilance in the night watches
That you called their names before his divine assistance the green was for how expansive
And all the covering was like the green majority that is in nature it flows down from your
Shoulders to the floor faces in complete detail there is no other garment as glorious as this
It has been the defining moments of your life God will read it when you stand in His
Presence but the greatest color Is red this is the sacred sacrificial blood of the lamb that
Washes all impurities of evil away and restores to complete wholeness we know right
Fellowship and are fully restored as sons and daughters of holiness and so it will be
Forever

This writing was initiated by my friend 19 this was my futile attempt to capture the real and the state of mind and what a state of mind it is when the writing table is transformed into a fount of wonder that I alluded to in the piece mind and heart in total accord



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Written by
Hal Loyd Denton  Pana Ill
(Pana Ill)   
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   Emanuel Martinez
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