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Oct 2018
There's a solemn place, so vast, which reeks,
of emptiness and deepened sorrow;
It's a place where no one can envision tomorrow,
for the day has been shattered into tiny pieces;
From the drowning sounds of tears' releases.

Careless missives scratched upon the walls,
of this cavernous cave where dark dissolves;
Into twilight, no matter the hour, and dreams,
evolve into nightmares of ruin and screams.

There's no escape, unless the heart stops beating,
and every soul among the crowd creates;
An unrealistic reason for their destiny, their fate,
yet honor bound they hold onto what's at stake.

Within the caustic reprisal from devil's doom,
a mystic cloud of gray covers up all faces;
The endless swirling of heavy smoke's revival,
sits upon the heads of those who need survival.

They grasp at hope despite its shallow promise,
to reap the benefits of life without the pain;
And when the sunlight's illusive rays diminish,
the dreary sky pours down its acid rain.
This was part of an exercise in a creative writing class, and as you can tell, I don't express heartless scenes that are traumatic and portray life without love or hope with great depth or confidence. But I know folks can often relate to being in the 'abyss of sadness' and perhaps this poem paints an appropriate portrait of feeling lost inside a world of NO TOMORROWS.
Thanks for reading this ! Fran McC.
Written by
Frances E McClelland  Hamilton, NJ
(Hamilton, NJ)   
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