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David Bremner
Poems
Oct 2018
Book Loan
She entered the canteen
With her coffee cup balanced
On a book.
It wasn't so much of a cup
I suppose
One of those shiny metal Thermos things
That don't break if you drop them
I'm rambling, prevaricating.
The book I loaned her
Two days after we met
And beyond eyes and ***
**** and cute turned-up nose
My eyes watched the book
Which she read
Day after day
Across the room.
I'd read it a dozen times
Knew it all by heart
No hurry I'll get it back when your done
I'm off for two weeks on Monday you might have to wait
What is this? Love? Infatuation?
Emotional adultery?
My story inscribing upon her heart?
Or just the slow progression
Of pages turned in the canteen
By her fingertips
Like days
Which I have to endure
To know the ending.
If you can give an answer please comment!!
Written by
David Bremner
Scotland
(Scotland)
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