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Oct 2018
But youth argues
too loudly it has all the answers
and is adamant it shall save the world
from its ugliness, corruption and decay
nothing shall stand in its way--
further still it proclaims:
we will be around forever
as we will die never
our spirit breathes out fire
and shall send a message
through the universe:
we are the world's saviour
none should question this or doubt--

youth--but the interregnum
the innocence that borders the naive
still in the breeding ground
of life's kindergarten
wisdom it has hardly found-

how harsh are the winds
of experience---how
they sweep away
the dreams and hopes
that were one's youth's treasure-house--

despair cripples
love withers
the heart suffers
strange and hostile
is the universe--

what has gone wrong?
is it the aftermath
of life's betrayal
or the callousness of people?

tears never shed before
how they now fall
is this but a litany of mistakes?
eerie silence broods in every corner
the youthful heart laments
and in agony aches.
* I couldn't find the first draft after completing it, became desperate, so wrote this version which is slightly different. Rather keeping it, I thought it would be better if I also post this, leaving the reader to compare both
Written by
Dr Peter Lim  M/Victoria, Australia
(M/Victoria, Australia)   
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