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Dawnstar
Poems
Aug 2018
Change these feelings of mine
Down in the valley of the fleeting stream
Parched Sudanese tongues crying to you
Below, below, the sacred Nile
Pestilence took my sweetheart
She was dark, now she is blue
Like the cataracts dividing the stream
And the tearducts dividing my eyes
Below, below, the sacred Nile
Torn in our tumult
From the bleak savan'
Starve like we all her cherrious face
Now forever blemished
Therefore let us dine on hardtack
Suffer for the things of the marble world
Below, below, the sacred Nile
Where we'll go and prosper
Go receive heaven's reward
Long, long, the vaporous mile
Fast along the toiling road
To the land of reward, we go
I compared her to a flower
Fair a fragrance as ever conceived
To think her smile is a nest for ants
Below, below, the sacred Nile
Change these feelings about me!
I am eager to see her again
But I won't obey the winds
Below, below, the sacred Nile
As far as fragrance is concerned.
A song.
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Dawnstar
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