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The needle-tip,

 

 

 

 

 

a bee sting

 

 

 

 

 

giving rise to a hive.

 

 

 

A sickening delirium

coursing mercurial under eyelids,

 

 

 

tapeworms and tendrils

weaving wildly:

 

 

 

teeming, churning tides breaking over

greedy teeth (a needy mouth

 

 

flaying flesh ferociously,

a fevered wolverine

whipping through a petting zoo).

 

Each agonizing second

slowly sliding by,

tacky molasses on cloth

covering a table in an innocuous

American home

bruises on mother's face

fade (eggplant to jaundice

to the crimson of the setting sun

dying behind the horizon

line {chopped across a counter-top

like a broken promise...}).  

 

 

 

 

All the lives we compromise

 

 

 

trying to cage a swarm.

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Written by
shane-hunt
American
Published
Jan 18, 2013
Lines·Words
25·99
Notes

I'm really unsure about this. In an attempt to create a chaotic feeling I'm afraid it's just vague or a collection of jarring imagery. Thoughts?

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