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Oct 2012
I awoke in paradise
After he made me
I was basked in moonlight
And the flowers danced for me
Walking around aimlessly
Was another just like me
He held my hand and we
Traversed our new home
Then one night while I was dreaming
A hissing voice came in my ear
Suddenly my mind was filled with
Oceans of blood
The next day I took a bite from
The tree I was supposed to fear
Then the world turned upside-down
I saw a vision of a crown of thorns
And punctured hands and bleeding feet
I dropped the fruit into his lap
But before I could stop him he took a bite
If only He told us that because of our transgression
A savior would later have to die
Lucy Tonic
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