Her wail drowned in a deep, black ocean So atrocious to be subdued by her own body She locked the gate to her mind and hid the key in her heart For who would find it and care enough to save her soul from complete numbness? Her body instead consumed the scars and her depression slowly drained her of life "For who would notice?" her mind thought with a sharpteethed grin "The good die young, thus it means I'm good?" the girl quietly asked herself And then laughed For she couldn't cry Couldn't care less Couldn't see herself any longer It was HER life and she would either die in vain now, close her eyes and drift away peacefully when the time comes, or break and deal with the pain alone For the truth may hurt, but secrets **** Thus she kept quiet to not concern anybody but herself But even then her unbearable suffering went unseen, unheard And the one way out always echoed in the back of her head Taking over har actions She cut She bled She prayed She could finally scream loud 'Cause...she's dead
A mirroring of my own depression, thoughts I think and feelings I feel. I'm still a beginner so I would love tips for improvement