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spysgrandson
Poems
Jan 2018
garden of the early dead
children all, in this field of white stones:
a thousand twin sons from different mothers
all is math, though here subtraction reigns supreme
I take four numbers from four, and am left with nothing
minuend deaths, subtrahend births
whether the difference is nineteen or twenty-nine, both now equal zero
zero years to return to a mother's desperate loving arms,
zero years to marry a sweetheart, raise a son, or again hoist a flag
for now the baneful banner is folded neatly,
for those whose numbers I tabulate
in this garden of the early dead
where errant weeds are slaughtered
lest they blaspheme the chosen grasses
kept neatly above the chosen ******
"garden of the early dead" is a phrase from Cormac McCarthy's Suttree. Verse inspired by my trips to VA cemeteries
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