She plays with they're hearts Just like they did to her before They pay the price, and roll a bad dice While she earns yet another mice to lead blind She loves them all deeply however she can never fall Never again - More and more fall for her like poison And just as you expect they fall-- fall and fall Boy tears they flood her world while she swims and enjoys While they simply drown. Yours truly, . . .
I am all new to this poetry thing and i thought it would be a good hobby, please if you can give back notes i should take on to help my writing.