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Nov 2017
Orange beams, flood through morning fog and wet leaves,
stop signs and whispered phone-calls echo through our minds,
"Was it a good idea to leave the house tonight?"
Running up and down the streets, hearts beating, shadows leading us,
"Was it a good idea to leave the house tonight?"
quietly open the slider, such a warm embrace of light,
We had been out for lifetimes, yet it only read 3:00 on the clock.
Just a little structured poetry game
*"7" lines
*"2" "nouns" per line
*verb "to run" on line "4"
*color "orange" on line "1"
*repeat lines "3" and "5"
**BONUS - hyperbole on line "7"
Written by
Gabe Ouellette  18/M
(18/M)   
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