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August 3rd

Orange beams, flood through morning fog and wet leaves, stop signs and whispered phone-calls echo through our minds, "Was it a good idea to leave the house tonight?" Running up and down the streets, hearts beating, shadows leading us, "Was it a good idea to leave the house tonight?" quietly open the slider, such a warm embrace of light, We had been out for lifetimes, yet it only read 3:00 on the clock.
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GabeOue
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Written by
GabeOue
18 / M
Published
Nov 15, 2017
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7·73
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Just a little structured poetry game

*"7" lines

*"2" "nouns" per line

*verb "to run" on line "4"

*color "orange" on line "1"

*repeat lines "3" and "5"

**BONUS - hyperbole on line "7"

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