Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

black

*was it the thread around my finger

that cut too deep

leaving a small ring shaped scar

in place of slight hope

every thought carved intricately

into my brain

the ink spread out and into whom

it once was

now dancing before my eyes again

a smoky figure

of something that used to be love

but ceased existence

the light that illuminated from ahead

has set behind

so all that was known and cherished

is vague and black*

Request permission to use this poem
Written by
lauren-ashley
American
Published
Jul 24, 2012
Lines·Words
16·78
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell lauren-ashley how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write