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SANDCASTLE...

I lied by the sea,

far away from the ebb-

uncared, untraceable,

a heap among the mounds.

 

You came to me first,

And then joined in she,

both squatted by me,

started the play with me.

 

Never can I forget,

the first caress-

I know not, yours or hers,

but it was like heaven.

 

Your juvenile dreams,

naive imaginations,

bestowed on my otiose self,

by your seasoned skills.

 

Grain upon grains,

both made me proud. 

Not conforming to a flaw,

meticulous maven masons.

 

When your hands tired,

she backed you up. 

While she was ******

 you tended her to health.

 

Finally, I stood tall-

an Olympian castle. 

Both were beguiled, 

I would never be happier.  

 

And, then came the storm,

Satanic vibes infested the air.

I couldn’t fathom what befell,

you were furious, she was crying.

 

Raised voices, clenched fists,

intimate moments castaway,

I stood a meek witness,

while a relationship was severed.  

 

Came along the lunar surge,

I was wiped away without a trace.

Both stood distant from the other,

watching me fall, filled with remorse.

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Mar 2, 2010
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