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Sep 2017
It started with three blind mice
one went to consult an ophthalmologist
quickly got cured and ran happily after the farmer's wife
leaving two blind comrades in the list--

that generous creature persuaded
the other two to do the same
provided full details including
the doctor's qualifications and name--

mouse number two rushed
to the eye-clinic
and told the doctor
'my eyes are sick'--

the good doctor had a string of degrees
managed to save 90% of number two's sight
it leapt for joy, the saviour he thanked from its heart
and exclaimed: 'Now I know the sun is bright!'

this left only one blind mouse
a hypochondriac it was--truly
it begged the other two to accompany it
and said: ' Please don't leave me'--

its condition was bad
it had advanced cataract
but the doctor was world-class
the little fellow recovered 70% from his skilful act.

no longer 'the three blind mice'
'running after the farmer's wife'
they ran away from their old home
and enjoyed happy days throughout their life.
Written by
Dr Peter Lim  M/Victoria, Australia
(M/Victoria, Australia)   
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