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Icarus (Villanelle)

So... What if I flew too close to the sun,

cimbing steadily through the open air

and my feathers all fell off, one by one.

 

Freedom and a reckless moment of fun

mixed with a child's propensity to err...

I know I will fly too close to the sun.

 

I left the earth with my song, still unsung,

drifted along, alone, without a care

and my feathers all fell off, one by one.

 

A chimeric mirage, to which I clung

and I pleaded Fates, my wings to repair.

So what, if I flew too close to the sun.

 

The journey over, quick as it'd begun.

Shining bright was the sun's terrible glare,

and my feathers all fell off, one by one.

 

The path once chosen, could not be undone

when caught in simple, Fates' auspicious snare.

So... What if I flew too close to the sun,

and my feathers all fell off, one by one?

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rebecca-askew
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Aug 26, 2017
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