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After A Final Line By Marie Howe

Not the moon itself, but the light that fell from it

reflected off the papery wings of moths

I almost mistook for shooting stars.

 

“Surely that’s not the ending”

Lauren slurped her soda noisily

as the credits began to roll.

“Shirley doesn’t live here”

was my only reply.

 

Cars began moving backwards

in my window, while pebbles

hurled themselves toward my windshield

as if to say

“Don’t. You’re not ready for this”.

 

My heart that had jumped during

the movie explosions not 5 minutes

earlier, was now oddly still.

Quietly shouting its disapproval.

 

Lauren didn’t make a sound

when we passed the street to her house

nor when my tires left gravel

and began rolling on sand.

 

Nor did she make a sound

when my tires hit the water

coming in from the lake ahead

as the car plunged into

the black black depths

and I could no longer control

our descent.

 

A moth fluttered against my window

trapped, as the moonlight disappeared.

It looked nothing like a shooting star now.

 

“Surely this is unfair to the moth”

my heart tried.

“Surely doesn’t live here”.

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May 1, 2012
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