It's a lovely drawing,
But
It
looks
like
y o u
f  o  r  g  o  t
y   o   u   r
s     p     i     n     e.

There's a way to fix that.

I    feel    like

it's       either

More shading or

m   o   r   e

I
N
T
E
G
R
I
T
Y

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