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Michael Mitchell
Poems
Apr 2017
Forever I'll miss you
Forever I'll miss you
Through thick and thin
How we stayed as a crew
You were my twin
Assisting each other we climbed and climbed
Your charisma keeps lifting me
If only I met you earlier in time
I would have evolved in glee
If only our souls stayed around
But alas, our time has come
So as you don your gown
Our strings of friendship will forever strum
This poem was one that my best friend wrote. This is his first poem so any helpful commentary will be helpful!
thanks! M&M
#friendship
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Michael Mitchell
Florida, United States
(Florida, United States)
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